Alternate Endings for Carmilla

NEW YORK CITY, 2001

INT. TRIBECA GALLERY (2001) - DAY

1.

ALEX (X's nephew Sheldon's son) looks up.

2.

A woman stands in front of an Anselm Kiefer canvas, The Morgenthau Plan.

3.

He is sure he didn't see her come in.

4.

All of a sudden -

5.

Her eyes fill with tears.

6.

Alex jumps to his feet.

7.

The woman turns, catching him -

8.

- in an awkward moment.

9.

He makes up his mind.

ALEX
Miss, may I offer you-

10.

CARMILLA (WOMAN)
A handkerchief?

He stopped carrying one when he came to America. She knows.

11.

CARMILLA
Look, what time do you open tomorrow?*

ALEX
The gallery opens at noon but I will be here at nine.

CARMILLA
Is a quarter to nine too early for you?

12.

ALEX
No.

CARMILLA
A quarter to nine, then.

13.

Next morning. Alex washes a coffee pot in the office sink.

14.

He looks at the clock - 8:46. She is late. Gallery door BANGS open -

15.

CARMILLA runs into the gallery.

16.

Then, into X and -

17.

- swings toward the large plate-glass window.

18.

The coffee pot hits the floor; shatters.

19.

A rain of glass shards

20.

Behind it, black smoke obscures the blue sky.

21.

Over black:

RADIO BROADCAST
If you are below Canal Street, walk north. Walk slowly and carefully...

22.

INT. MIDTOWN CAFE - NIGHT

The server leaves coffee for ALEX, a pot of tea for CARMILLA.

23.

They are both covered by a thin layer of dust, as if they have been through a haboob.

24.

A YOUNG MAN with dark hair enters.

YOUNG MAN
Llamirca.**

25.

CARMILLA
Stefan.

26.

To Alex's surprise, he kisses Carmilla's hand. The way she takes it, it's not some boho affectation, either.***

27.

CARMILLA
Stefan, this is Alexander. He escorted me up from TriBeCa.

STEFAN
Thank you for looking after my sister. I'd have come earlier if it weren't -

28.

ALEX
I know. The whole city has shut down. Everyone seems to be in shock.

STEFAN
You are not?

29.

ALEX
I am, too. It's been like an instant dream.

STEFAN
Might as well. They have been calling for blood 3,000 miles away.

30.

CARMILLA
Do they even know whose?

STEFAN
I've been hearing "Pearl Harbor" all day.

31.

ALEX
They mean "surprise" - ?

CARMILLA
So they can go to war.

32.

CARMILLA (CONT'D)
Just like they burned 200,000 Japanese civilians alive for 2,400 American soldiers.

33.

CARMILLA (CONT'D)
We'd better go now. Thank you, Alexander, for keeping me company.

ALEX
My pleasure -

34.

ALEX (CONT'D)
Wait. I didn't catch your name.

35.

CARMILLA
Llamirca.

ALEX
What an unusual name.

36.

CARMILLA
It's just a name.

- THE END NYC/'01 Version -

* There is a technical problem: September 11, 2001 was a Tuesday. So it's not likely that galleries would be open the day before - unless they have all switched to closing on Wednesdays by the early 21st century.

** In the LeFanu novella, Carmilla also uses names "Mircalla" and "Millarca," all anagrams of each other.

*** This is what Stefan does to Carmilla in 1934, indirectly flirting with X.

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